Traffic and housing problems in major cities could be solved by moving large companies and factories and their employees to the countryside. Do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, the quality of life in large cities is becoming worse because of the degradation of traffic and housing, which is brought about by bulky companies and factories. For this reason, the question whether should these enormous industrial estates be moved to rural areas has drawn many arguments to the public. From my perspective, this idea is feasible and there are compelling reasons why I concur with this method.
To begin with, there are justified reasons from those to support changing the location of industrial zones. First of all, displacing manufactories from municipal areas to countrysides not only solves the traffic and housing problems but it also cracks the lack of employment in rural zones. There is no need for pastoral inhabitants to leave their native soil to go to bustling cities to find jobs. This leads to the sharp diminution in the amount of emigrants, which cause the problems of housing shortages in urban areas. Secondly, moving to mechanized zones out of busy regions will reduce traffic congestion. In urban areas, employees in big plants comeback their homes at rush hour, which is the reason for overcrowded roads.
Apart from the concerns expressed above, another reason why industrial areas should be moved to countrysides is that with the appearances of voluminous workshops, traffic systems in rural lands ameliorated. The employers will take action to modernize bucolic zones, especially the traffic systems, in order to support their workers,
In the light of aforementioned factors, I am convinced that relocating bulky workshops to the suburbs is a splendid solution of the scarcity of accommodation and traffic congestion.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 190, Rule ID: WHETHER[5]
Message: Can you shorten this phrase to just 'whether', or rephrase the sentence to avoid "the question"?
Suggestion: whether
...mpanies and factories. For this reason, the question whether should these enormous industrial estate...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, secondly, so, apart from, as to, first of all, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1414.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31578947368 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83937888885 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.601503759398 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 429.3 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.6574112629 49.4020404114 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.545454545 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1818181818 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.18181818182 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209642460272 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0712291532221 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0442527018608 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109406282071 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0523450108651 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.87 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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