Traffic jam
It is true that traffic jam has become a huge issue in a lot of large cities. There are many reasons for this, however, some possible methods can be taken to solve this problem.
In terms of reason, traffic congestion result from many causes. First of all, one of the main reasons leading to traffic jam is people's poor awareness of obeying traffic rules. For example, during rush hours, people try to commute as fast as they can, this is the reason why they break traffic regulations to cause traffic jam.
Secondly, traffic jam occurs regularly in big cities because of the increase the number of personal traffic such as motorbikes or cars moving the roads. Besides, a significant population growth is a main reason.
Finally, another cause is the low quality of roads and infrastructure. The roads are too narrow to meet the need of commuting among people.
To solve this problem, we should be use the effective solutions. Firstly, we need to enhance people's consciousness of following traffic rules. We can apply it by educated people or heavy fine. Secondly, we need to reduce the personal traffic by encouragement such as people should be use the public traffic as buses. Government also invest to develop a public transport system, which has high effectiveness and quality such as high speed bus, or subway.
Further, the quantity of emigrate into city also need to limit. Government also encourage people work in their countryside by improve economic, in hand a lot of works and develop the life's quality in countryside.
Besides, they need to improve and renovate the road system on the big cities
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, finally, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, for example, such as, first of all, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1343.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91941391941 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62786752308 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.556776556777 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 422.1 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.9550378527 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.0 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0588235294 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.11764705882 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.38176352705 160% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.360860157608 0.244688304435 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115282851775 0.084324248473 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.152560788152 0.0667982634062 228% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157820853245 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.16476964221 0.056905535591 290% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.0946893788 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.96 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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