A museum near your home is looking for people to do part-time voluntary/unpaid work. You would like to do some voluntary/unpaid work at the museum. Write a letter to the museum director to apply for the unpaid work. In your letter:
Explain why you want to do voluntary work at the museum.
Describe some skills and qualities you have that would be useful.
Give details of when you would be available for work.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to express my interest in the position of part-time voluntary work at your museum.
There are several reasons why I would like to do this type of work. Firstly, I am interested in historical events related to the Vietnam War because I feel grateful for the sacrifice of military soldiers. Secondly, the museum, one of the most spectacular tourist attractions in Saigon, attracts a large number of international visitors. Therefore, working there brings me a great opportunity to communicate with them to sharpen my English skills, such as listening and speaking skill which are essential for me when I move to Canada next year.
I believed I am a qualified applicant for this position. Thanks to reading, I have gained enough fundamental knowledge of Vietnamese history to hold conversations with visitors. Besides, my computer skills could be useful for producing videos which provide information on the television screens along the hall.
At the moment, I have tight work schedule on weekdays, but I am available every Saturday from 10 a.m. to 5 p.m.
Incidentally, please find my CV attached in this email, and I can be reached either by mail or by phone. I look forward to having an interview in person at your earliest convenience. Thank you for your consideration.
Yours faithfully,
Dat Tran
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...r your consideration. Yours faithfully, Dat Tran
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...ideration. Yours faithfully, Dat Tran
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, firstly, if, incidentally, look, second, secondly, so, therefore, i feel, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1122.0 937.175257732 120% => OK
No of words: 222.0 206.0 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05405405405 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8600083453 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01336201292 2.54303337028 118% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 127.690721649 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.698198198198 0.622605031667 112% => OK
syllable_count: 348.3 290.88556701 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.540584213 44.8134815571 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.5 76.5299724578 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 16.8248392259 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 4.34317383033 196% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2594087424 0.216113520407 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0925436962639 0.0766984524023 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0841579256066 0.0603063233224 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140877100453 0.12726935374 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0948693019805 0.0580467560999 163% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 8.37731958763 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 70.7449484536 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 8.71597938144 138% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 7.59969072165 119% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 41.2886597938 155% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 8.62886597938 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.