As transport and accommodation problems are increasing in many cities, some governments are encouraging businesses to move to rural areas. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
As transportation and housing issues has been worsen in many cities, the relocation of firms to rural areas is promoted by some governments. Although this trend may have an adverse bearing on society, I believe the positive sides are more significant.
On the one hand, the relocation may cause some issues to businesses. One of issues that they may confront relates to skilled labors. In rural area, the proportion of skilled workers is more limited than that in cities. As a result, businesses have difficulty to recruit enough right people. Moreover, businesses which decide to relocate to the countryside may experience transportation difficulties because the infrastructure system is not developed. The expenses incurred from retaining employees and transportation end up canceling out any cost saving made.
On the other hand, this trend exerts some certain advantages. Firstly, businesses which move to the countryside will have advantage relating to profitability. Rural areas often have lower property price, that help businesses to reduce operation cost. In some countries, governments often have policies of tax incentives that draw investment in the countryside. This policy is beneficial to the firms which move to rural area. Secondly, the relocation of firms to rural area will make great contribution to reducing the traffic congestion and lack of household in the city. This would certainly ease the influx of people migrating to the cities for employment, so overcrowding in urban regions, as a problem, may be alleviated.
In conclusion, despite of some drawbacks, the trend that businesses move to rural areas confer more benefits.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 47, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'worsened'.
Suggestion: worsened
...nsportation and housing issues has been worsen in many cities, the relocation of firms...
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Line 3, column 727, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...gions, as a problem, may be alleviated. In conclusion, despite of some drawbacks...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, in conclusion, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1400.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44747081712 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08154501768 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583657587549 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 448.2 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.2460632287 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.5 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0625 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.6875 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244737996047 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0794722140553 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0572924441157 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157068548405 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0460566771383 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.03 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.84 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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