Transport delays and long journey times are a widespread phenomenon in many cities today. What is the cause of this problem and how could the situation be improved.

Essay topics:

Transport delays and long journey times are a widespread phenomenon in many cities today. What is the cause of this problem and how could the situation be improved.

It is the case that the time for transportation being longer happens regularly these days in large cities. There are a lot of reasons for it, however, I believe the governments still have some solutions to address this phenomenon.
The reasons for this is the traffic congestion related to the overcrowding vehicles and the degrade of traffic infrastructure. Regarding the former, the overpopulation in megacities requires the increase of a large number of vehicles while the road is limited, as a result, this causes to a number of bottlenecks in the main roads and delays the transportation movement. As far as I am concerned, the existing network is too overwhelming as the overload of transportation puts a strain on the amenities, degrades the over-stretched system, and interrupts the flow of transport leading traffic jam.
Despite the aforementioned difficulties, I believe that the authorities ought to invest in better amenities in terms of high-capacity public transports substituting for outdated-bus, which have a positive effect on tackling the number of vehicles on the road since to the saving space of these transports having more seats for people thanks to the double-floor. One way forward in order to solve these issues is the governments should launch a public campaign to urge residents to use public transportation to commute from home to work, it is an effective way to decrease the weighty burden on the existing system as well as lessen vehicles moving in the road.
In conclusion, it deems this phenomenon is one of the crucial problems right now, however, this can be solved by some new policies.

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Average: 6.1 (1 vote)
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IELTS Writing Task II - IELTS Academic

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 89, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...elated to the overcrowding vehicles and the degrade of traffic infrastructure. Regarding th...
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Line 2, column 207, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
... in megacities requires the increase of a large number of vehicles while the road is limited, as ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, regarding, so, still, well, while, in conclusion, as a result, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1365.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15094339623 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.23782820821 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.558490566038 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 425.7 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 20.2975951904 163% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 88.7605627517 49.4020404114 180% => OK
Chars per sentence: 170.625 106.682146367 160% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.125 20.7667163134 160% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.75 7.06120827912 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152073096544 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.071532705475 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0439753771607 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104516342927 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0436292744393 0.056905535591 77% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.4 13.0946893788 148% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.98 50.2224549098 76% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.3001002004 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.56 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.1190380762 150% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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