Unemployment is one of the most serious problems facing developed nations today. What are the advantages and disadvantages of reducing the working week to thirty five hours?
It is questionable that many countries have to deal with a pressing issue as an unemployment => such a pressing issue as unemployment. One solution has been => which/that has been put forward is to cut the working week to thrity five hours . In my point of view , this solution is much more controversial than beneficial, and other solutions need to be found .
It is clear that limitting => limiting working time to thrity five hours per week can lead to some minor benefits . Firstly , since => thanks to cutting working week , workers have more time to get involved in such leisure time as entertainment , exercises and holidays . This help => helps them to improve and be in a better health condition and enhancing comfortable spirit for working . Secondly , it creates more opportunities for unemployed people, who are dominated by others. This provides those one a workforce to enter => This create employment chances for them and also prevents them from committing crimes .
However, a strong arguement not to implement this proposal => a strong argument against implementing this proposal is due to the drawbacks associated with it . Firstly , carrying out that solution means that workers’salary is unexpectedly reduced . In this case , there will be a serious problem for those one , who => for those are unable to cover their such main expenses as buying houses , children school’s fee , electricity and unpredictable situations like cancer or accidents . What is more , since those one => since some individuals are unwilling to share their working week as hours , a new tension in working atmosphere is => would be created . By doing this , former workers and those new candiadates one => candidates have to compete negatively . This increases the risk of no supporting together => not supporting each other for company ‘s target and also such contraservation [this one has no meaning] between them as using violence to treat as soon as new candidates threaten those former one ‘s benefits => treat newcommers as long as they threaten those former ones’ benefits.
In conlusion => In conclusion , although some advantages that proposal brings => despite some advantages brought about by that proposal , I strongly believe that it is better not to introduce shorten => shortening working week scheme since it works only in theory and not in practice .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, second, secondly, so, in conclusion, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2028.0 1615.20841683 126% => OK
No of words: 384.0 315.596192385 122% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28125 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4267276788 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97028973731 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.53125 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 600.3 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 74.8487066614 49.4020404114 152% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.2 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 27.0 5.01903807615 538% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15970985382 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0607609866702 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.051523160606 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104363997932 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00458725546707 0.056905535591 8% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.64 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.