University education should be free to everyone, regardless of income. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Education is a significant part of everyone’s life and plays a pivotal role for improvement of not only individual but also national economy. These days, there has been an idea that higher education such as university should be supplied for all without charging. From my standpoint, I totally advocate for this idea in virtue of these values it brings for society and economy.
On the one hand, providing university freely give a plethora of benefits for society. In a view of life standard, it is the most essential for those who could not afford tuition fee such as orphans or the homeless to pursue their study path. With the bachelor degree, they can have chance to earn more money, therefore, their life is also improved markedly. Regarding to literacy, if more and more people are accessed university education, the literacy rate will increase. As a result, the society becomes more modern and civilized.
On the other hand, this idea stimulates the economy to flourish via enhancing the ability of workforces. By the way of accessing university freely, they gain easily academic knowledges which is important for them to. Enterprises, therefore, have more experts to upgrade their products and expand their company.
With merits relating society and economy I mentioned above, I, therefore, this idea is absolutely reasonable.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, regarding, so, therefore, such as, as a result, by the way, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1131.0 1615.20841683 70% => OK
No of words: 217.0 315.596192385 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21198156682 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8077187971 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.649769585253 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 378.0 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 24.1913666878 49.4020404114 49% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 94.25 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0833333333 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.66666666667 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0682137855866 0.244688304435 28% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0258793622915 0.084324248473 31% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0431147192999 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0361671884693 0.151304729494 24% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0338947308346 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.64 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.48 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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