In this modern world, person's work, study and communication is almost impossible without the smartphone. However, it is often argued by some that an usage and influence of mobile phone is detrimental as smoking, so that smartphone also have to prohibit like smoking. From my point of view, I totally disagree with this statement for two reasons.
To commence with, mobile phone helps people to keep in pace with their modern world. In other words, for the purpose of acquiring a new invents, news and scenes that happened around the world, smartphone plays the role as a connector between these happens and humans. As a result, this gadget can influence positively on individuals as they gain many useful information from it. My friend, for instance, has various knowledge because she often use her mobile phone to read new things.
Another reason why phone should not be forbid is the fact that it is essential when it comes to keep in touch with each other. Mobile phone allows person to talk and meet with their family and friends regardless the long distance between them. If the smart phone banned, those people who live in an overseas can not reach their close persons, and it may result in isolation or depression. Therefore, in order to prevent human from such difficulties, smartphone cannot be restricted and it is crucial for communication.
To conclude, although some believe mobile phone is similar to smoking and should be banned, as far as I am concerned, I concur that forbidding mobile phone is nonsense because it gives opportunity to people to be more world's person and it facilitates communication between inhabitants.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 147, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...owever, it is often argued by some that an usage and influence of mobile phone is ...
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Line 3, column 131, Rule ID: DT_JJ_NO_NOUN[2]
Message: Probably a noun is missing in this part of the sentence.
...her words, for the purpose of acquiring a new invents, news and scenes that happened ...
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Line 3, column 347, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun information seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much useful information', 'a good deal of useful information'.
Suggestion: much useful information; a good deal of useful information
... positively on individuals as they gain many useful information from it. My friend, for instance, has v...
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Line 3, column 445, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[3]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'uses'.
Suggestion: uses
...has various knowledge because she often use her mobile phone to read new things. ...
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Line 7, column 219, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'worlds'' or 'world's'?
Suggestion: worlds'; world's
... gives opportunity to people to be more worlds person and it facilitates communication...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, may, so, therefore, for instance, as a result, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1374.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01459854015 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71906383052 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.605839416058 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 427.5 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.4467543968 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.5 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8333333333 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231170572445 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0760058462269 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0702504716348 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146654294334 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0632877948587 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.