The use of mobile phones is antisocial like smoking. Smoking is banned on many places. Mobiles phones should be banned like smoking. To what extent do you agree or disagree.
In today's fast world technical advancements are taking place day by day. It is thought by many by some people that using cellphones are against social norms like smoking which has been restricted on some places therefore, there should be legal restriction on usage of mobiles. While I accept that more use of mobile phones is harmful but I also accept that these can not be banned completely.
On the one hand, overuse of cellphones may bring numerous harmful implications for the people. Firstly, increase in technology is being on daily basis because of changing taste and preferences of consumers as they use innovative models of mobile phones to satisfy their desires which causes wastage of time because people, especially, young ones spend most of their time on using mobiles which results in lower grades as well as poor health. Secondly, sitting or laying for a long time leads to obesity among people as people consider using mobiles is a good way to pass leisure time moreover, it doesn't only cause obesity but also many other health disorders such as cancer, eyesight problem, sleep disorders and depression among children. Finally, to get benchmark performance it is crucial to study properly as well as take meals on time; however, mobile phones divert children's mind towards video games.
On the other hand, according to my perception the usage of mobiles can be limited but can not be prohibited completely. We can not even imagine our lives without usage of mobiles as in these days people fully rely on cellphones as we can communicate anywhere with anyone. Furthermore, people prefer online services such as banking services, booking tickets and online shopping which is popular among people, thus ,it is quite Impossible to ignore role played by cellphones in our daily lives. Besides this, different apps such as whatsapp ,facebook and many more can be installed for varying purposes. In addition to this, using mobiles allow people to get name and fame. For an instance, people create their own channels on YouTube website for earning bread and butter as well name. Last but not least, in order to meet requirements of public companies produce cellphones which provide enrolment prospects to workers. As a consequence, we can't survive without mobile phones in today's contemporary era.
To conclude, although more use of mobile phones has no good impacts on the community yet I believe that the significance of mobiles can not be denied despite of negative results.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, while, in addition, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2084.0 1615.20841683 129% => OK
No of words: 411.0 315.596192385 130% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07055961071 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50256981431 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60651291557 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 236.0 176.041082164 134% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574209245742 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 675.9 506.74238477 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 77.8798904965 49.4020404114 158% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.25 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6875 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.8125 7.06120827912 167% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 5.01903807615 398% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22609875172 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0744529170936 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.066330738961 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157252691991 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0450741226069 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.41 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 118.0 78.4519038076 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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