The use of mobile phones has increased dramatically in recent years.
what are the positive and negative effects of this trend?
Earlier, the humans were not very much familiar eith the technology though usagr of mobile phones were very less. However, in the mordern era, new technologies are invented day by day. The best example is cell phones, the users of it significantly rise in few years. Among them some people consent that it has lot of positive ends. While others remonstrate that it leaves the negative impacts.
There are various postive points to usage of smart phones. The first and foremost, it connects the world with the touch of finger. It is a device through that people can communicate easily eventhough there is vast distance between them. The another benefits are it hepls to reduce communication gap. Furthermore, the people can learn plathora of things from the mobile phones with the helps of internet, therfore it helps to solve the problems that they can face. Moreover, people can stored their memories in different forms like photographs, videos and whats so ever, as it contains the huge storage.
On the minus, there are also negative impact of it. First of all, the long time usage of mobile phones for gaming purpouse and so on. It leads to various psychological issues. Like depression, while agrassive behaviour which makes to people unconcious by their mind. In addition, it affects on health too.apart from that it affects on eyesights by continoud using of mobile phones thus it creats vision issues, addiction of mobile ohones are also dengerous for students hence it creates distractions from their studies. It can turned out be as poor grades in their curriculam as well as lack of confidence.
In conclusion, every coin has two sides. It has both postive as well as negative effect but it has lot of postive features that can makes people more advanced.
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- The use of mobile phones has increased dramatically in recent years.what are the positive and negative effects of this trend? 67
- The use of mobile phones has increased dramatically in recent years.what are the positive and negative effects of this trend? 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
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Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'turn'
Suggestion: turn
...distractions from their studies. It can turned out be as poor grades in their curricul...
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Message: Probable usage error. Use 'and' after 'both'.
Suggestion: and
...coin has two sides. It has both postive as well as negative effect but it has lot of posti...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, moreover, so, thus, well, while, apart from, in addition, in conclusion, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1478.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95973154362 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56987393868 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590604026846 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 462.6 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 49.2237246585 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.7894736842 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6842105263 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.78947368421 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154503294449 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0349706043991 0.084324248473 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0357820329754 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0838362176365 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0274587539776 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.0946893788 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.19 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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