The use of mobile phones has increased dramatically in recent years. What are the positive and negative effects of this trend?
The modern era has witnessed an increased amount of mobile phone usage users around the world. Since digital phones have various features that could possibly assist people, their role in daily life has been more and more significant. From my perspective, everything has its own pros and cons, and cellphones too. In this essay, I will discuss the advantages and disadvantages of using mobile phones.
On the one hand, the mobile telephone is famous for its communication ability. Users can make a phone call or chat with other person people by using platforms and apps such as Messenger, Instagram, or Line. Moreover, cellphones nowadays are becoming more and more cutting-edge so their designs are coming in small and light sizes, which could enable individuals to carry them everywhere. Another thing that is worth mentioning is the source of unlimited information online that cellular phones produce. People usually take full advantage of these data for the purpose of their working, studying, or researching. Because there are multiple webs, platforms, and games online on mobile phones, hence, individuals find that entertainment here is exciting and attractive. All of these keep them entertained when they have their free time and help them to relieve stress from their hectic working days.
On the other hand, cellphones also have disadvantages that it is needed to consider. Mobile phones may help students in their studies if they know how to use them wisely. As aforementioned, phones have the ability to let people access online websites, games, and so forth. Due to this reason, students can be distracted from their work. Researchers have also discovered that smartphones also impact negatively human health, causing eye and brain diseases. Since these mobile phones have become so necessary and of course, addictive people cannot seem to take a break from using them. Even while driving a car, some people tend to talk on the phone. This becomes a major cause of road accidents nowadays. Many laws have also been established that ban the use of a mobile phone while driving. This possesses a threat to the safety of people which must be taken seriously.
In conclusion, when the usage of these mobile phones is kept under control, they can be a blessing to mankind in the present time. However, extensive use of them can lead to serious problems which are not at all safe for anyone.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 144, Rule ID: MAY_COULD_POSSIBLY[1]
Message: Use simply 'could'.
Suggestion: could
...gital phones have various features that could possibly assist people, their role in daily life...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, however, if, may, moreover, so, while, another thing, in conclusion, of course, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2008.0 1615.20841683 124% => OK
No of words: 396.0 315.596192385 125% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07070707071 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46091344257 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63762112508 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 230.0 176.041082164 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580808080808 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 642.6 506.74238477 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.5481119802 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.3043478261 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2173913043 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.17391304348 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184459519508 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0568828781464 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0476029912754 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117664129826 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0462601014533 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.83 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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