Consumers are faced with increasing numbers of advertisements from competing companies To what extent do you think are consumers influenced by advertisements What measures can be taken to protect them

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Consumers are faced with increasing numbers of advertisements from competing companies. To what extent do you think are consumers influenced by advertisements? What measures can be taken to protect them?

In the marketing world, advertisement is the most go-to way to access to the customers’ needs, hence, many labels have been taking advantage of this and forecasting huge numbers of advertisements on a daily basis. Personally, I assume that buyers to some extent might both benefit and lose due to the vast influential effect of this marketing strategy.
First and foremost, on a regular basis, from billboards to short break from TV programs, consumers are bombarded with advertisements which consistently has a toll on their shopping decisions. According to many exhaustive researches, the more choices we are provided with, in reverse, the more time it deprives from us to come to one last decision. For example, when a buyer is intrigued by products Coca Cola, out of the blue, an advertisement about Fanta shows up and results in the indecisive confusion in purchasing the final drink. In the long run, our time in other activities is deterred as a replacement for shopping. Therefore, there are certain moves can be done by the authority to secure the consumers from advertisements.
As Tv break is the most fertile land for advertisements, the government can limit the numbers of meaningless advertisements during those time and replace it by short meaningful messages instead.
However, besides that flaw of this advertising strategy, on the other hand this is also a precious opportunity to find out about the most suitable to each customer’ situation. With the proliferation of this marketing campaign, the buyers are opened to a various list of products. For instance, in the early of 21th century, in Vietnam only a minuscule amount of the people there had the chance to approach with hamburgers but thanks to the vast contribution of the art of advertisements, a few decades after this dish has been one of the most common domestic fast food. Moreover, at the present, not only they vary our shopping lists, but they also provide us a crystal clear of the products’ information beforehand.
In conclusion, in general, although the benefits of advertisements can not be ignore, in many circumstances, the excessive advertising results in many considerable negative effects to the customers.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, hence, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in general, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 66.0 41.998997996 157% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1857.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 359.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17270194986 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35284910392 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.18555068712 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576601671309 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 579.6 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 4.76152304609 336% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 51.9520716765 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.846153846 106.682146367 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.6153846154 20.7667163134 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 7.06120827912 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186246630186 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0647939250335 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0559852631879 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104548941355 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0452046392968 0.056905535591 79% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.59 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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