The use of personal cars has increased more than ever before but this use of cars causes many problems. What are those problems? In order to reduce these problems, should we discourage people to use cars?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge.
There is no gainsaying the fact that with the ever increasing demand to attain luxury in life many a person nowadays has more than the required amount of cars. Although them being a tool of convenience, they certainly bring along some problems, such as disastrous air pollution and heavy traffic snarls. Therefore, an echelon of society believes that should the use of cars be discouraged, we would be able to curb this problem at hand. However, I do not completely accord on it as according to my school of thought, there are far better ways to do so.
To initiate with the problems that beset with the use of cars. First and foremost, there is an increase in the pollution levels as compared to the olden days, when there were fewer cars. To be precise, the more cars on the road, the more air will be tainted. In other words, this is leading to a very dramatic climate change around the world. For example, according to a survey conducted by Indian Climate Board, 11% of the depletion of the ozone layer is constituted to the pollution caused by vehicles. Second to this, an enormous number of cars are now a leading cause for traffic snarls even in conurbations. Therefore, unless a solid solution to this menace is not attained it would lead to a catastrophe.
Having proposed by a certain cohort of the society that individuals should be discouraged from using their cars is only possible in theory. This is because they should be taught about the harmful effects of unnecessary use of cars, only then would an individual support this cause. Take india for instance, New Delhi in 2012, conducted campaigns and made billboards about the dreadful effects of pollution and also made public transport free for females, which encouraged them to use it instead of cars. Moreover, many multinational companies in India incentivize their employees who car-pool, which has effectively reduced traffic congestion in the cities.
To reiterate, having said that, even though more use of personal cars has led to a rampant increase in air pollutants and traffic problems; however, these cannot be simply curbed by enforcing people not to use their cars. But rather, individuals had better be enlightened about various other methods of transport and the benefits that come with it.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ort and the benefits that come with it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, moreover, second, so, then, therefore, for example, for instance, such as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 41.998997996 143% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1903.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 386.0 315.596192385 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93005181347 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43248042346 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6699992655 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554404145078 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 587.7 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.9610751639 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.941176471 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7058823529 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.05882352941 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.291131528516 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0873886385639 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0732987301875 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179792708887 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00621521648736 0.056905535591 11% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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