ln many parts of the world, children are given more freedom than in the
past. ls this a positive or a negative development?
There is no gainsaying the fact that the children learn from things and allowing them to do so is immensely important to maintain the fabric of a society. Therefore many a country nowadays is liberal with the freedom of their younglings; however this trend was not so popular in the past. The reason for this being: the parents in the olden days were very conservative and the children were made to follow the indigenous beliefs of their parent, which hindered their progress.
To initiate with the negative effects of restraint on freedom in the past. Primarily, the progenitors in the past had a notion that should the child be allowed to decide on his own, he would lead himself into trouble. This is because, they thought that unless they do not help it is not possible to succeed. For example, according to a survey conducted by Bharath Matrimony, 77% of the brides and grooms in India are forced to marry in the households of their parents choosing rather than their own. Second to this is the fact that children are made to follow religious and cultural beliefs taught by their parents. The older they grow, the stronger the teachings. In India for instance, children had better follow the beliefs taught by their parents, even though they contradicted the laws of science. Therefore, many backwards countries are finding it difficult to progress with such a school of thought.
Having said that in many countries who are modernizing and leaving behind the indigenous rituals. First and foremost, children in such countries are given more freedom to think and work their minds. To be precise, they are developed in such a way that they can scavenge life for themselves without any help. Norway for instance, promotes parents to make their children work and lets them choose their field as well from the age of 18, which has led to G.D.P growth by 2%. Moreover, children being allowed to do whatever they please and whomever they marry has also benefited them. For example, a survey conducted by Tinder, a dating app, all over the world 88% who considered love marriage had a stable and a happy life as compared to their counterparts.
To reiterate, putting the children through the hardships of following the world and old beliefs is a thing of the past. Hence, allowing the children their free will and guiding them through the path that they have trodden has a far more positive aspect.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, hence, however, if, moreover, second, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 24.0651302605 175% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 61.0 41.998997996 145% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2005.0 1615.20841683 124% => OK
No of words: 412.0 315.596192385 131% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86650485437 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50530610838 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50138405462 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.514563106796 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 581.4 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.8374433141 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.526315789 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6842105263 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.10526315789 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202402993978 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.065676570215 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0533005677932 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131472429936 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.018083099286 0.056905535591 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 50.2224549098 134% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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