The use of social media, e.g. Facebook and Twitter, is replacing face-to-face contact for many people in thier everyday life. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantage?
Today is called the era of social media as Facebook or Twitter substitute meeting in person. Although there are both merits and demerits, I opine that the benefits are greater than its drawbacks.
To begin with, there are major demerits related to changing the method of contact each other. First and foremost, the intimacy among people would be dramatically decreased. This is because the time people spend on social media is much more than they conversate in person. This, as a result, leads to lose friends in real life. Furthermore, people have a tendency to show off themselves on social media. By posting their best part of the life, they are more likely to pretend to be luxurious on their social media. However, if it does not match with their real life, this in turn can make huge depression.
Nevertheless, there two prime merits if people use social media more often. Firstly, meeting people and having a conversation, especially for companies, can be highly simplified to some extent. Considering the fact that we need to make time and expend when we have appointments, using social media in terms of contact people helps them to save money and time. Secondly, it offers a great opportunity to make international friends. For example, we are not required to book a flight ticket to meet friends in other countries as well as it is undoubtedly beneficial that time and place will not bother us when it comes to globalization.
In conclusion, although there are some disadvantages of contact people on social media by losing intimacy, the advantages are far more.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Nevertheless,
...his in turn can make huge depression Nevertheless there two prime merits if people use so...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, well, for example, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1284.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82706766917 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60230766839 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.545112781955 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 415.8 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 266.0 20.2975951904 1311% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1284.0 106.682146367 1204% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 266.0 20.7667163134 1281% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 150.0 7.06120827912 2124% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253539198811 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.253539198811 0.084324248473 301% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159423895713 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0421458871524 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 134.3 13.0946893788 1026% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -198.51 50.2224549098 -395% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 107.0 11.3001002004 947% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.21 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 20.45 8.58950901804 238% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 53.0 9.78957915832 541% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 108.4 10.1190380762 1071% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 53.0 10.7795591182 492% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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