The use of social media is replacing face-to-face interaction among many people in society. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
Nowadays many people argue that social media have negative impact to real social life. While there are some negative aspects in usage of social media. I agree that advantages outweigh the disadvantages, and in this essay I will explain why.
Social media can be considered as diseas of modern world for several reasons. The strongest argument is that by using social media most of the people have a disbalance between virtuality and social reality. In result we have an individuals which are under influence of fake news and poor advertisements of media, and adolescents with anxiety-like behaviour. Moreover, humans who use social network can easely hide real emotions and purposes. So, people are able to flatter and lie eachother.
However, there are more advantages that can be realy useful. Firstly, social network help to have a conversation with many people in one time. For example, senior managers can safely chat and have a discussion on their networking site, and resolve some issues within the short time frame. Secondly, social media helps to save time. Modern life has massive changes everyday, new technologies are encroaches, and to keep up with them we need to be multitasking individuals. Consequently the solution of the problem is social network, wich help to do many tasks at one time even order a meal to dinner.
To sum up, it is obvious that social media have irreversible impact to our social life, even if there some disadvantages I believe that advantages always outweigh.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 88, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ve negative impact to real social life. While there are some negative aspects in usag...
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Line 3, column 226, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'an individual' or simply 'individuals'?
Suggestion: an individual; individuals
...y and social reality. In result we have an individuals which are under influence of fake news ...
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Line 5, column 365, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...e time. Modern life has massive changes everyday, new technologies are encroaches, and t...
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Line 5, column 473, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Consequently,
...we need to be multitasking individuals. Consequently the solution of the problem is social n...
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Line 7, column 165, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...elieve that advantages always outweigh.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, while, for example, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1262.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 247.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10931174089 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77064504454 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.611336032389 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 415.8 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.2416875499 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.1333333333 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4666666667 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.93333333333 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237620417132 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0883663377793 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0591398434259 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166349835021 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0375435521872 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.06 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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