The use of social media is replacing face to face interactions among many people in society. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages.
Social media has gained a lot of popularity over the last decade. Everyone has access to social media through their phones. The use of social media has replaced face to face interactions among many people. This essay will discuss if the advantages of this practice outweigh the disadvantages.
There are many advantages to using social media. One such advantage is that people can converse with their loved ones who live in a different state or country through social media whenever they want to. For example, if there is a family member or friend that is ill, social media can be used to inform loved ones who aren’t living nearby. This information reaching them immediately and will allow them time to book tickets to come and see their loved ones.
Accompanying the advantages are also certain disadvantages. Due to the ease of being able to converse with family members or friends, people have stopped prioritising meeting their loved ones face to face. For example, before social media became so widely used, people used to go to visit friends and family over weekends. That practice has reduced in popularity over the last decade. People usually travel to visit their loved ones only if there is an emergency or if there is an event.
The increase in the use of social media has many advantages and disadvantages. In my opinion, the advantages outweigh the disadvantages because social media brings people closer together by allowing them to stay in contact with each other at all times. However, people must realise that conversing through social media isn’t a replacement of them meeting face to face but is a blessing allowing them to be connected even if they are miles apart.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 188, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...topped prioritising meeting their loved ones face to face. For example, before socia...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, for example, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1415.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9649122807 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57675285554 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.501754385965 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 465.3 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.7421421515 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.4375 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8125 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.375 7.06120827912 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.392414582403 0.244688304435 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.155012991407 0.084324248473 184% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.150588566047 0.0667982634062 225% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.271991519151 0.151304729494 180% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107147937008 0.056905535591 188% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.19 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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