The use of social media is replacing face-to-face interaction among many people in society.
Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
It is true that in our technological age individuals extensively rely on social media to exchange socially. In my opinion, the disadvantages of this phenomenon are outweighed by its advantages.
On the one hand, we cannot deny the negative side of this development. People can become more isolated and loose communicational and co-operational skill. In other words, when people do not do tangible conversation they lose the sense of unity, as a result, they may become self-centered. For example, scientists who have conducted research in this area have argued that people who prefer to communicate via social media have more egoistic character.
On the flip side, the most important benefit is that the social network is proven extremely convenient for information exchange and relationship maintenance, therefore, it will help to save money and time. By the way of explanation, due to the busy lifestyle of individuals it is getting hard to stay in touch with loved ones, however, social media platforms as Instagram, Telegram, Zoom have made it incredibly easy to make fruitful connections with relatives and potential leads. Moreover, meeting online rather than face-to-face interaction can prevent the spread of various diseases especially now, during the pandemic, replacing traditional meetings with online conferences has prevented infection with the COVID-19. For example, journal Science reported: with COVID-19, online learning and working have proven themselves to be a viable solution for continuity in education, and numerous problems were addressed due to social media.
In conclusion, from my point of view, online communication is a new trend that brings more advantages than disadvantages because they help us in various complicated circumstances and simplify our work.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, for example, in conclusion, as a result, by the way, in my opinion, in other words, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1520.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.56776556777 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.18412163715 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.644688644689 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 486.0 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.9953742081 49.4020404114 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.181818182 106.682146367 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8181818182 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.4545454545 7.06120827912 176% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184040766756 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0585144905006 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0332258483434 0.0667982634062 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0954964089027 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0276633526933 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.2 50.2224549098 60% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.32 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.15 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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