using a computer everyday can have more negative than positive effects on children. Do you agree or disagree?
It goes without saying that the computer become an indispensable tool in our day-to-day activities. As a matter of fact, young people are more attracted to using computer than older ones. Although, this device is useful for people, by my reckoning, computer can have more devastating influences on children.
On the one hand, there are some merits of using computer which are beneficial for young people. First of all, computer could provide a wide range of material and information to help children learn new things and broaden their knowledge. In addition, effective and easy to access, computer can be a trigger for children to interact more in school tasks.
On the other hand, dark side of using computer everyday should be emphasized. Since children spend a great deal of time in front of computer, they are likely to be addicted to computer. As an illustration, most children love playing video games constantly, almost 10-11 hours per day. In this way, they will probably lose their interest in studying and even participating in class. Moreover, not only does overuse of computer cause psychological hazards, but also it leads to some serious physical problems. Perhaps this could be a reason that more and more kids suffer eye trouble. Additionally, because of staying in a same position for too long in front of computer screen, children are in danger of back pain problem.
In summary, spending too much on computer can have some pros and cons, albeit it can brings more adverse effects for young people. I personally believe that parent should establish more restrictions on using computer, otherwise, few years later, children will have involved in insurmountable difficulties.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 86, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'bring'
Suggestion: bring
... have some pros and cons, albeit it can brings more adverse effects for young people. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, so, in addition, in summary, as a matter of fact, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1425.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16304347826 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79041731583 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.623188405797 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 438.3 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.92502009 49.4020404114 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 95.0 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.53333333333 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.333433864995 0.244688304435 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107910296104 0.084324248473 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0752849602747 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.215655857379 0.151304729494 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0416958280818 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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