Nowadays food has become easier to prepare. Has this change improved the way people live?

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Nowadays food has become easier to prepare. Has this change improved the way people live?

Based on famous quotation, 'You are what you eat', there are a few things that could be as important as food. With regard to technological advancements, along with food burgeoning market, nowadays, a host of people are able to prepare food without concern about time and energy. By my reckoning, albeit this change has brought considerably benefits, its drawbacks can not be eliminated.

Many support the view that modern appliances and methods lead to remarkably altering people's lifestyle. First, before development of processed food, microwave, electric stove, food preparation was time-consuming activity and needed a great deal of effort to carry out. So people did not have enough time to do many other things. As a matter of fact, cooking has been become easier and faster by new equipment, hence, people can save noticeable amount of time and spend more time in entertainment and recreational activities. On the other hand, by modern tools such as refrigerator, not only can we preserve food for longer time-span, but also it can enable us to use and kind of foods regardless of temperature, season and geographical positions.

On the downside, the improvements in food preparation methods have led to the growth in fast food industries, like mushrooms after the rain, causing the great number of health hazards. Easy to cook and time-saving, ready-made food like canned and frozen ones really take off among people. This results in health-related diseases. In other words, many of nutritious containing may be lost through canning and freezing process.

In summary, considering lifestyle, easiness in preparing food has both pros and cons but it is everyone's duty to be aware about how to cook their meals in order to avoiding health problems.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, may, really, so, in summary, kind of, such as, as a matter of fact, in other words, with regard to, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1476.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19718309859 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95338377108 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.665492957746 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 455.4 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.76152304609 231% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.2283141834 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.538461538 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8461538462 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.2307692308 7.06120827912 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194654946644 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0632803406019 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.031188077401 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104168828671 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0424616177096 0.056905535591 75% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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