Violence portrayed on TV and in the movies leads to an increase in our society. People who watch violent movies are more likely to become criminals. Do you agree or disagree.
Since the beginning of the 21st century, televisions channels and movies have showed increasing numbers of violence scenes. Some people believe that viewing violence on the screen of movies and TV will alter their audience to become criminals, while others argue that people who watch these violence scenes are more awareness, and these movies will not affect on their behavior. This essay will discuss how these criminal scenes have a strong influence on the people behavior, and can alter them into criminals.
Increasing number of crimes scenes in TV channels and movies will affect on people, especially on youth. Some people are trying to imitate what they see in their lives. Recent research, which was conducted in USA, has shown that 58% of the American people mimic what they watch on TV, and this led to increase in the criminal rate by 11% than it was before 1990. Therefore, the criminal scenes which are showed on TV channels and in movies affect significantly on people behavior and it led to increase the violence inside communities.
On the other hand, some people think that these violence scenes could help to increase the consciousness between people. People may understand the risk of doing criminal behavior. For example, youths are understanding that doing any criminal activity will lead them to the jail. These people are unaware of the fact that these violence scenes have led increasing domestic violent. Thus, movies which contain violence scenes have led to increase the number of criminal in the societies.
In conclusion, this essay discussed how the violent scenes in the TV channels and movies have led to increase number of criminal, and people behaviors have become more violent. In my opinion, TV channels and movies should stop showing the violence scenes, and they have to select the movies which talk about history or drama rather than violent.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, so, therefore, thus, while, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1582.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10322580645 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44072284204 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.451612903226 0.561755894193 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 477.9 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.7968953447 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.0 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1428571429 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.92857142857 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.317954129979 0.244688304435 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129212595973 0.084324248473 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0675427603526 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.224599694536 0.151304729494 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0365641823564 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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