“The solution to the overpopulation of this planet is education.”
Discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with this statement. Support your point of view with reasons and/or examples from your own experience or observations.
Write between 200 and 300 words
Planet earth is quickly becoming overpopulated. Natural resources are under pressure because of burgeoning cities that are sprawling across countries. This essay will discuss why education is in fact the best way to solve this problem; yet it will take significant time.
The more well educated countries on this planet are the ones that are having fewer children. There is a strong correlation between effective education systems and smaller families. Similarly, there is a strong correlation between a lack of education and larger families. When a country becomes better educated they have fewer children which results in a lessening of the pressure of overpopulation on this planet.
One of the main reasons why education is so important is that women can learn more about birth control. In many overpopulated countries women are poorly educated and some are even illiterate. A recent study has shown that when women are properly educated and literate they have greater decision making power over the number of children that they have. In short, educating women is one of the most important factors of curbing population growth.
This essay discussed how education can solve the pressing issue of overpopulation by analysing the connection between education and fewer children and the importance of educating women especially. In my opinion, education truly is the answer to sustaining a manageable population on this planet.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 272, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... lack of education and larger families. When a country becomes better educated they ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, similarly, so, well, in fact, in short, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.5418719212 142% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 31.9359605911 88% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 5.75862068966 260% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1217.0 1207.87684729 101% => OK
No of words: 225.0 242.827586207 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40888888889 5.00649968141 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87298334621 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86924604025 2.71678728327 106% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 139.433497537 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551111111111 0.580463131201 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 396.9 379.143842365 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.4298791471 50.4703680194 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.6153846154 104.977214359 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3076923077 20.9669160288 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.38461538462 7.25397266985 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 6.9802955665 158% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.107136735536 0.242375264174 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0465107034704 0.0925447433944 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0381674543273 0.071462118173 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0785377233341 0.151781067708 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0358506052769 0.0609392437508 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 12.6369458128 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.3 53.1260098522 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.8 11.5310837438 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.32886699507 100% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 55.0591133005 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.94827586207 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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