Combat sports such as boxing are popular. Some people believe that combat sports encourage violence while others believe they promotes self restraint and discipline.
Choose which side you most agree with and discuss why you choose that position. Support your point of view with details from your own experiences, observations or reading.
Since the beginning of the 21st century, new type of sports, which includes violence, has increased dramatically. Some people believe that combat sports improve the self confidence and rise the discipline, while others argue that such these sports could increase the violence within the society. This essay will discuss how practicing combat sports can lead to spread the violence withing the community and increase the domestic violence.
Increasing popularity of combat sports make people behave more aggressive and therefore increasing the violence between people. Learning sports, which contain some risky movements, may make people to use these movements rather than using another peaceful methods. Recent study, which was conducted in Washington University, has shown that 90% of American people people, who are involved in combat sports, use what they have learnt during their lives, which consequently, has contributed to spread of violence within the American societies. Therefore, it seems clear that spread of popularity of combat sports has contributed significantly in increasing the violence.
On the other hand, some people think that these types of sports are making people more discipline and increasing the self confidence. They think that people could release their stress through doing these types of sports. For example, people can do these sports within specific places which are arranged by the governments or by the local community organization. These people are unaware of the fact that these people could use these sports in the streets and this will cause to spread of violence. Thus, tough laws should be regulated to limit the spread of combat sports and consequently minimize the violence inside the community.
In conclusion, this essay discussed why the popularity of the combat sports should be limited. In my opinion, I am inclined to believe that practicing of any type of violent sports should be prevented and there are alternative methods to improve the individual discipline and self confidence far from these violent sports.
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...orts in the streets and this will cause to spread of violence. Thus, tough laws should be...
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...idence far from these violent sports.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, if, may, so, therefore, thus, while, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 6.10837438424 180% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 5.94088669951 236% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 27.0 20.9802955665 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 31.9359605911 125% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 5.75862068966 226% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1758.0 1207.87684729 146% => OK
No of words: 320.0 242.827586207 132% => OK
Chars per words: 5.49375 5.00649968141 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 3.92707691288 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64633443417 2.71678728327 97% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 139.433497537 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.496875 0.580463131201 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 534.6 379.143842365 141% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.6876760168 50.4703680194 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.571428571 104.977214359 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8571428571 20.9669160288 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.28571428571 7.25397266985 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 6.9802955665 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 2.75862068966 399% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.291296108793 0.242375264174 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120850603266 0.0925447433944 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0782647047471 0.071462118173 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.198422079762 0.151781067708 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0527055977096 0.0609392437508 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 12.6369458128 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 53.1260098522 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 10.9458128079 120% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.86 11.5310837438 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.32886699507 100% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 55.0591133005 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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