Water pollution has been an increasing problem over the last few decades. What cause water pollution? How can we prevent this problem?
In today’s world, it is true that there is an increasing number of issue related to water pollution caused by many reasons. As far as I am concerned, this phenomenon can result in serious problems, which can be tackled using appropriate measures.
It is possibly said that this issue may be caused by some main factors. One of the prominent reasons concerning this problem is because of the individual’s awareness of protecting the environment and natural resources are not enough. Virtually any human activity can have an effect on the quality of our water environment. For instances, when farmers fertilize the fields, the chemicals they use are gradually washed by rain and absorbed into the surface water or the groundwater nearby. As a result, it leads to the fact that the water we use can be polluted and also a major cause health problems for us. Sometimes the causes of water contamination can be from factories, which send dirty waste to nearby canals, rivers or lakes without going out any precise methods or processes. Those wastes can also include radioactive, human and the wildlife may have adverse effects on their health and reduce the quality of life if water pollution continues.
In truth, some imperative measures should be taken to resolve these prospective issues. Reducing the use of chemical fertilizer, treating wastes from factories before releasing them into the environment are two solutions highly recommended. It is proven to reap greater advantages in protect our environment, especially water pollution, which is prevent us from health problems and limit serious pollution. The government should impose strict sanctions laws on polluting the environment, increase people’s knowledge about protecting their health and their habitat.
In conclusion, there are indeed various repercussions regarding human activities detrimental impacts upon the water environment, yet it can be solved once according measures are enlisted imperatively.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 347, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'prevented'.
Suggestion: prevented
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, regarding, so, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, as a result, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1668.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.41558441558 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94410886826 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616883116883 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 526.5 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.9312654447 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.142857143 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.301692391931 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102066959528 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0779314940362 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170810150949 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0860141178734 0.056905535591 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.11 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.