With the advent of technology in this era, people are increasingly dependent on the computer based technology that transforms their lives in a much better way. Though there are countless advantages technology offers to the mankind, there are numerous setbacks that can even be dreadful for humans.
Constructive approach based on technology will become the norm of the future. Automation will replace all the primitive mode of techniques installed across the world. Based on the technological innovations, engineers master themselves in building smart cities, roads, bridges and even the apartment people live in. Currently, only few cities and homes are categorized under the smart zone. It is estimated that this number will exponentially increase within a decade or so. There are high chances for the world to get totally replaced by versatile systems. Artificial Intelligence programs will manipulate people's way of life on all techno platforms. Special protocols and algorithms based on the predictive analysis is on it's way to supplant even the role of data scientists. Nevertheless to mention, even the ancient agricultural equipment and tools; tar roads; construction materials; landfills and soil; commutation will be upgraded to a much advanced mechanized systems with proper chemical constitution.
However, machines replacing the role of a man can induce uncertainties in the society we live. Machines lack in empathizing to a given surreal situation. It is just coded programs revolving around humans expected to provide services without being innocuous. Sometimes, a bug in the code or any wrong installation can be malefic to people. For instance, an automated car supposed to stop for the pedestrians can be misconstrued and indeed lead to the death of the person using the zebra crossing. With predictions and decision making technology, there are high chances for manipulative activities by the Artificial Intelligence. People might fall for the virtual world rather than realizing the veracious environment.
Technology used at the right intensity with a good platform changes people's life more convenient. They must learn to embrace technology in a righteous path so that it's efficacy is harnessed to the fullest. Computers replacing manpower is not new to this world. The benefits must be articulated to humanity with much caution and care.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 777, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Nevertheless,
...plant even the role of data scientists. Nevertheless to mention, even the ancient agricultur...
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Line 4, column 334, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...to humanity with much caution and care.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, nevertheless, so, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2000.0 1615.20841683 124% => OK
No of words: 365.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.47945205479 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37092360658 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05598477948 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 224.0 176.041082164 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613698630137 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 630.0 506.74238477 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.2683406189 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.9090909091 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5909090909 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.95454545455 7.06120827912 28% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226209948292 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0580914164524 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0585973987219 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141571937597 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0586329285324 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.1 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 131.0 78.4519038076 167% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.