We cannot help everyone in the world that needs help, so we should only be concerned with our own communities and countries.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
it is not true that people can not help to others across the border. due to international charity organisations like, khalsa aid and others people can help with many ways in other countries. However, other think that people should only think about their community and country for doing help. Therefore, I disagree with this statement o large extent
to to begin with that people who want to do help of those people who are living in other countries and they are very needy of help. In this case, those help of needy people in other countries by giving money to international organisations such as, khalsa aid who are already working not only in their home country, but also in countries like, Iraq and other countries which are suffering from terorism they are providing foods, clothes and accommodation for refugees . Nowadays, it has become more easier to do help of needy person for in other countries for everyone by just giving some of money from their budget to international charities , which was impossible in past time.
Moving further, due to advancement of technology people are able to help in every Conner of the world by taking the help of online helping websites such as www.internationalvoluntryprogram.org. these kind of websites are mainly designed for helping people on international level. In this case if people do not have money , then can send some clothes which they do not using by taking address of theses websites as many websites show their address for any kind of help
On the other hand, it also necessary to help people their community and others part of their home country as much as they want to do help of others people in others countries. this is because people of every country can be suffer from any natural or other problems even like most developed country America Australia and others. Therefore,every individual should concern about doing help locally.
In conclusion, there are many way to do help of other people in other countries so it is impossible that people are unable to do help across the boder by taking the help of international charities and the websites.
- We cannot help everyone in the world that needs help, so we should only be concerned with our own communities and countries.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? 56
- We cannot help everyone in the world that needs help, so we should only be concerned with our own communities and countries.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? 56
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, then, therefore, in conclusion, kind of, such as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 64.0 41.998997996 152% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1773.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 358.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95251396648 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34981470047 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07584519417 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.432960893855 0.561755894193 77% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 558.9 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 94.4582138655 49.4020404114 191% => OK
Chars per sentence: 147.75 106.682146367 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.8333333333 20.7667163134 144% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.16666666667 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.01903807615 339% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220749762138 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115947198522 0.084324248473 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0589628056376 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157198289021 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0433354259645 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.5 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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