While it is true that the ultimate goal of a company is to make profits, I would argue that enterprises should take responsibilities for making a contribution to a better society. This essay will identify some reasons for my perspective.
On the one hand, earning much money from business also generates some benefits for society as a whole. Firstly, the higher profits companies can earn, the more taxes they pay to the government. As a result, there are more funds to spend on key fields such as education and health care, leading to higher standard of living within the community. From individual standpoint, the growth in corporations is likely to result in more job opportunities for local residents, which contributing to increase their families’ income as well as reduce the rate of crime in the certain country.
On the other hand, I am in favor of the idea that factories should pay much attention to their social responsibilities while making money. First of all, their activities may have effects on society regarding to environment. In other words, production process may pose negative harms to the environment without controls. For example, factory emissions and industrial waste may be the major factors causing the increase of global warming and water pollution. Therefore, firms and companies should have a sustainable system of disposing such wastes, limiting the release of waste into river in order to deter water pollution. Moreover, companies can make efforts to help society improve by donating money or providing scholarships through philanthropic organizations, increasing not only their public image but also enhance the quality of life within the community.
In conclusion, although the primary focus of companies is on raising profits, they should be responsible for the development of society in various aspects from the improvement of living standard, job opportunities to environment and social welfare.
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- Some people think women should be given the same opportunity to work and excel just like men Others believe that a woman s responsibility should be limited to looking after children and housework What is your opinion Use relevant details and examples to s
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, may, moreover, regarding, so, therefore, well, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as, first of all, in other words, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1635.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3431372549 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03909796666 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59477124183 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 515.7 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.9948101391 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.769230769 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5384615385 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 15.8461538462 7.06120827912 224% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163408084116 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0525003698148 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0555195873806 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.088534391224 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.027929222537 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.99 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.47 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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