As well as making money, businesses also have social responsibilities.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Businesses have always sought to make a profit, but nowadays an increasing number of people believe that companies also have social obligations besides contributing to the economy. I fully agree with the notion that companies should do more for society than simply make money.
On the one hand, companies have always been inclined to gain profits. Logically, businesses are established on the basis of making money, and their utmost priority alongside profiting is covering fundamental running costs such as employees’ wages, office rent, and utilities. If a corporation is not financially stable, it is unlikely to thrive in highly competitive markets nowadays. In other words, it is crucial for companies to yield profits to meet both the customers' and employees' needs before concerning societal responsibilities.
On the other hand, running a business with the sole purpose of maximizing profits is unethical. The most basic social obligation that business owners have is to treat their employees well by providing healthy work environments, and paying a “living wage”. Another simple way that companies can contribute to society is to allocate funding to help address pressing problems namely poverty. For instance, Unilever, a pharmaceutical multinational company, is renowned for having a notable record of financially and medically aiding impoverished people in developing countries. As a result, not only do they remain a prosperous organization but they are admired by customers, as well. Finally, actions simple as paying sufficient taxes is bound to improve the company’s public image.
In conclusion, the importance of companies' social responsibilities needs to be equally accentuated as their financial objectives.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, finally, if, so, well, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1486.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.69348659004 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.18169187617 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.64367816092 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 471.6 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.1772699141 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.307692308 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0769230769 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.76923076923 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230172151987 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0700484326767 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0670976478631 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140622076951 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0811639345413 0.056905535591 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.72 12.4159519038 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.19 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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