What are the causes and solutions to higher rates of obesity among children in some countries?
Recently, higher rates of overweighted children have been recorded in several countries. There are two principal reasons why the figure has risen: unreasonable diet and sedentary lifestyles. In order to tackle this issue, daily exercise and a balanced diet should be encouraged among juveniles.
In general, obesity occurs as a result of children's behavior in daily life, particularly their poor diet and an inactive lifestyle. To begin with, children nowadays tend to stay indoors and sit in the same place for hours watching TV, playing games, chatting, and so on instead of engaging in physical activities. In addition, due to the effects of COVID-19, youngsters have been staying home for longer than ever, contributing markedly to their inactivity. This results in excess calories not being burned which is the dominant factor leading to weight gain. Apart from a stagnant lifestyle, it is an unhealthy eating habit that makes children in the modern age more prone to obesity. It is no doubt that those who are young prefer sugar-rich and fast food over nutritious and low-calorie food. Moreover, the fact that fast food restaurants mushroom everywhere providing cheap, convenient, and good-tasting food plays a significant role in their poor diet.
However, this problem can be addressed in several ways. First of all, schools should have nutrition courses where both students and parents can learn about the vital of having a proper diet along with the adverse effect of being overweight. In the course, they ought to be taught what a balanced meal consists of and the steps involved to prepare that meal as well. Besides having a balanced diet, a dynamic lifestyle is also advisable. Along with the required exercise periods at school, extracurricular activities such as field trips can be implemented which not only help them get physical exercise but also strengthen their soft skills.
In conclusion, numeral factors lead to the increasing rates of obesity among children in multiple countries with the two significant ones being having unbalanced diets and inactive lifestyles. Nonetheless, equipping both the parents and their offspring with knowledge about nutrition and encouraging physical activities is the key to resolving this adverse trend.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, however, if, moreover, nonetheless, so, then, well, apart from, in addition, in conclusion, in general, no doubt, such as, as a result, first of all, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1915.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 357.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.36414565826 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34677393335 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80171422278 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 176.041082164 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619047619048 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 580.5 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.8859435276 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.647058824 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.1764705882 7.06120827912 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.11887107195 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0381930636129 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0632540173619 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0855258271017 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0535037498828 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.41 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 78.4519038076 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, however, if, moreover, nonetheless, so, then, well, apart from, in addition, in conclusion, in general, no doubt, such as, as a result, first of all, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1915.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 357.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.36414565826 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34677393335 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80171422278 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 176.041082164 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619047619048 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 580.5 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.8859435276 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.647058824 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.1764705882 7.06120827912 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.11887107195 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0381930636129 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0632540173619 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0855258271017 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0535037498828 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.41 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 78.4519038076 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.