As well as making money, businesses also have social responsibilities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, many businesses and companies have made a great amount of money and contributed the economic progression of the world. Therefore, opinions differ as to whether they ought to be responsible for society. While many experts think that making money is the main role and the only social responsibility of businesses, I would argue that there are some other activities they need to do to help society.
On the one hand, there are some reasons which motivate individuals to believe that companies only need to create money. The most fundamental one is that should businesses earn a lot of money, they will be able to pay for taxes posed by governments. For example, in Vietnam, many tremendous organizations like Fahasa or Thien Long expense billions of dong for taxes. Thus, Vietnamese authorities have enough money to spend for fields such as education or healthcare and tackling national issues. Moreover, when making a great deal of profits, commercial organizations can have plenty positive impacts on the development of the economies of many countries. To illustrate, Alibaba corporation has helped the economy of China to develop at a startling pace since it attracts many foreign organizations to invest to this country. As a result, the more companies decide to make investment to China, the faster the economy progresses.
On the other hand, I would opine that beside making money, businesses should have some duties for the development of society. Firstly, businesses should co-ordinate with authorities to deal with social problems like poverty or crimes. For instance, it is much better for companies to spare money for helping impoverished individuals. Therefore, it can not only help to eradicate the poverty but also make people more reliable in these organizations. Secondly, industrial businesses need to be concerned about the environmental problems. They had better find suitable approaches to reduce the influences that industrialization and production processes could have on the ecosystem.
In conclusion, we cannot deny that companies and corporations should focus on how to make profits, but it is much better for them to have some other social accountabilities.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 157, Rule ID: WHETHER[6]
Message: Can you shorten this phrase to just 'whether', or rephrase the sentence to avoid "as to"?
Suggestion: whether
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, while, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1850.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 346.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.34682080925 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31289638616 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10125168873 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546242774566 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 600.3 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.0446035203 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.823529412 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3529411765 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2941176471 7.06120827912 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208171483329 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0689012417551 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0468821654075 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140983620964 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0445731463808 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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