As well as making money, businesses should also have social responsibilities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Today, some claim that businesses should also have social obligations. While I acknowledge that the primary purpose of any company is to generate profits, businesses should also make social contributions within their sphere of influence.
On the one hand, it seems logical that the primary objective of companies engaged in a free market should be to achieve sound financial health. Every form of organization incurs expenditures. Office space, legal costs, payroll, company credit cards, and other institutional expenditures may rise exponentially. According to the U.S. Small Business Administration, the average price to establish a micro-business is approximately $3,000, whereas the estimated cost to initiate a home-based franchise is almost $5,000. In addition to these one-time fees, utilities, and other recurring expenses must be paid periodically. Without being realistic about a startup's financial flow and debt, the owner will be unable to operate. In these situations, the societal obligations of a company become obsolete.
On the other hand, there is no distinction between individuals and businesses regarding their ethical responsibilities. Since social evils are solvable, businesses should share equal accountability with governments for society's betterment. For instance, the Vietnamese YouTube channel "Quang Linh Vlogs" has received enthusiastic support from both Vietnamese and Angolans. In the recordings, Linh and his team instruct local Angolans on how to grow vegetables and raise livestock. Linh also launched a social project to assist 5,000 underprivileged children in school by renovating and equipping classrooms. They proved that it is more humanitarian for businesses to contribute to society than to maximize revenue.
In conclusion, although I agree that making money is the top priority for businesses, they should also make social contributions within their reasonable purview.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, may, regarding, so, thus, whereas, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1647.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.90322580645 5.12529762239 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.30368360403 2.80592935109 118% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 523.8 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.3028149072 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.9375 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4375 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224559381445 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0674655149694 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0897288504541 0.0667982634062 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168553870933 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102846926763 0.056905535591 181% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 28.84 50.2224549098 57% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.64 12.4159519038 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.31 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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