What are the advantages and disadvantages of children watching TV?
The invention of television was changing humans life completely.It becomes an indispensable habit of modern people , especially children are the majority.There is also has some pros and cons of children watching TV.In other paragraphs I will discuss this problem.
Let’s begin by looking at the benefits of watching TV. One of the main positives of this activity is that it gains their creativity by watching educational programs.What I meant that children can learn subjects on some episodes of “ VTV7-The Chanel of Vietnamese national educational “ while others increase their knowledge of different country and cultures which broaden their horizons .Besides, it’s also has some interesting TV Shows such as “ Ellen Shows “ or “ The Little Big Shots” attracting family and children enjoy together.
Turning to the other side of the argument, watching TV too much might cause some serious issue on younger heath.For instance , when children watch TV at close range , it can damage their eyes. This is the reason many children today often suffer from eyes diseases such as nearsighted or farsighted.Furthermore , this can be promoted bad metabolism, it is very harmed to their body.Besides , many children forget to enjoy activities on the outside , then lead to the lack of contacting with their friends and soft skills.
All things considered, there are both negative and positive sides of spending time on TV of the young generation.Parents should consider carefully to avoid their kids from addicted to watch TV and towards them to the outside world more.However, watching TV also helpful in the someway.It cannot be denied that the TV is more and more increase its influence on people.Sitting together in front of screen is also a way to connect members in your family.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, furthermore, however, if, look, so, then, while, for instance, i mean, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1531.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33449477352 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10677327949 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.620209059233 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 460.8 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 47.0 20.2975951904 232% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 153.221426555 49.4020404114 310% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 255.166666667 106.682146367 239% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 47.8333333333 20.7667163134 230% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 15.5 7.06120827912 220% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 23.0 5.01903807615 458% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.278127244543 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.152385248817 0.084324248473 181% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0505728820479 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167601272599 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0119463531568 0.056905535591 21% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 27.6 13.0946893788 211% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 23.77 50.2224549098 47% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 21.6 11.3001002004 191% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.52 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.98 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.5 9.78957915832 209% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 20.8 10.1190380762 206% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 21.0 10.7795591182 195% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.