What are the advantages and disadvantages of leaving your country to live or study abroad?
Nowadays, people live in “globalising world,” which means, it is common to decide studying or working in foreign countries. It is believed by some that this phenomenon has a number of benefits, while others pessimistic about this change.
On the one hand, people who do not support a policy of “open” country normally claim that if someone visits an another place, even if it is located in their own country, they might feel that they are aliens. Thus, it has no doubt that in foreign countries it will be worse and they will miss hometown. I personally have lived here in Kazakhstan ever since I entered a primary school, and 11 years have passed already. Now I feel that I am neither Korean nor Kazakh; in Korea I had observed that my typical daily habits were different from that of people who spent their whole life there.
On the other hand, there is a number of advantages from abroaders’ visit. Recent development status in science and economy could not be reached if humanity did not communicate with each other. For example, many recent scientific breakthroughs are the results of the collaboration of numerous scholars. They were from various countries, and they accomplished such a great researches as mapping human genomes or an observation of Higgs Boson. It is believed by many biologists and other scientists that the only difference between humankind and beasts is an ability to communicate effectively, even relatively small societies, such as the earliest civilization, made mankind stronger that any non-human beings. For example, a family would not seek for a group of wolves to hunt, while big communities as a city or town could do so; unlike the fact, that a group of hyenas would not go against a group of lions even if the former outnumbered the latter; it infers that food chain was the only ruling force for the rest but Sapiens. Thus, human beings were the first who broke the law and the only specie who could build the modern society.
To conclude, it is clear that globalization is an unstoppable trend, and although now we are not staying at a perfect harmony, it is definitely worth to cooperate. Still, there are many problems that we are facing, and each nation’s ability will not enough to solve those.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 49, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , &apos
..., people live in 'globalising world,' which means, it is common to decide st...
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Line 3, column 119, Rule ID: AN_ANOTHER[1]
Message: One of these determiners is redundant in this context. Choose only one: 'a place' or 'another place'.
Suggestion: a place; another place
...y normally claim that if someone visits an another place, even if it is located in their own cou...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so, still, thus, while, for example, i feel, no doubt, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 7.30460921844 246% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1893.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 385.0 315.596192385 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91688311688 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4296068528 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86264405459 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 226.0 176.041082164 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587012987013 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 589.5 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 65.6937000193 49.4020404114 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.2 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6666666667 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.46666666667 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0630567623216 0.244688304435 26% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0230225920152 0.084324248473 27% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.039409544568 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0360811186668 0.151304729494 24% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0255011377443 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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