Some people think Governments should take measures regarding the healthy lifestyle of individuals. Others think it must be managed by individuals. Discuss both sides and give your opinion
Health issues continue to be a controversial topic in every country. It is believed by some that government should set rules related to health well-being of a nation. However, others claim that individuals themselves should decide on how to leave. In this essay both views will be discussed.
On the one hand, some people feel that one individual’s own willingness is not enough to
maintain a healthy lifestyle. For instance, there are numerous adults who are addicted to liquor, coffee, and etc. Use of any of those on a regular basis will most probably lead to negative consequences. Consumers are aware of harmful effects of indulgence foods; however, despite the fact that harmful substances will shorten their life expectancy considerably, they experience difficulties giving up this food. From that, it can be reasonably inferred that without external forces, it is hard to maintain a healthy lifestyle for an ordinary person. Meanwhile, there are some harmful effects, which come from sedentary habits, but it is apparent its effects are less significant than those of the foods.
On the other hand, if a person already has a well-planned lifestyle, they will not need support from the state. Even if a citizen has badly-designed daily plans, the government should have nothing to do with that. In other words, a nation is responsible for providing healthcare facilities, but it is up to individuals to use those or not. For example, several developed countries effectively promote gym to office workers who lead a sedentary lifestyle, thereby decreasing the frequency of cardiovascular diseases. However, every conscious person has to take responsibility for themself, not relying on others. If people do not use those facilities, it will not have any impacts.
Overall, it is evident that some parts are the responsibilities of government, such as controlling cigarettes, liquors, and etc. However, individuals are also in control of their own health status; we are to decide our future. Your own health misfortunes should not be blamed on others.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 107, Rule ID: AND_ETC[1]
Message: Use simply 'etc.'.
Suggestion: etc.
...lts who are addicted to liquor, coffee, and etc. Use of any of those on a regular basis ...
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Line 4, column 120, Rule ID: OF_ANY_OF[1]
Message: Consider simply using 'of' instead.
Suggestion: of
...ddicted to liquor, coffee, and etc. Use of any of those on a regular basis will most prob...
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Line 8, column 121, Rule ID: AND_ETC[1]
Message: Use simply 'etc.'.
Suggestion: etc.
...uch as controlling cigarettes, liquors, and etc. However, individuals are also in contro...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, well, while, as to, for example, for instance, such as, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1743.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 330.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28181818182 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09842965054 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572727272727 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 553.5 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.9661906978 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.7368421053 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3684210526 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.15789473684 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143248319222 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0445894953383 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0383352178879 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0805025131885 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0367197866886 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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