What has cause people to immigrate from your country to other places ?
Recent years have witnessed a boom in the number of immigrants from one country to another, and this has became a globally popular trend. Two main reasons area to blame which are the pursuit of a better living standatd are more education opportunities.
The first trigger of immigrants’ decision to settle in a foreign country for permanent residence is the improved living standards. As most of them primarily originate forom developing countries, a life in a developed one promises more favorable prospects. They can enjoy more job opportunities with high-paying positions, which makes earning a livelihood less tough and thus a rise in their living condition. Furthermore, the infrastructure and facilities in developed countries area more modern and advanced than in developing countries. New settlers will have little difficulty in commuting to work every morning or enjoy enhanced healthcare services.
Besides employment prospects or higher living standard, the trend of global immigration is also attributable to the search for education opportunities. People, especially children, are entitled to an advanced education right from their childhood, fostering their future development. This can explain the phenomenon that many international students would pursue their higher education overseas as the curriculum is scientifically designed and guarantees a more successful career for graduates. To illustate, in 2016, the number of Vietnamese student who study abroad totaled to almost 130,000 students, quite a surprising number
In conclusion, immigrants usually move to the development countries which can provide more job opportunities, higher living standards and better education as well.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 106, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'become'.
Suggestion: become
...om one country to another, and this has became a globally popular trend. Two main reas...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, furthermore, if, so, thus, well, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1461.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.82071713147 5.12529762239 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.23440713296 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.629482071713 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 456.3 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.2354808013 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.818181818 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8181818182 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.63636363636 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0970059745368 0.244688304435 40% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0400449960206 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0458349364418 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0711752926326 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0264412521165 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 13.0946893788 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 50.2224549098 64% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.77 12.4159519038 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.33 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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