When choosing a job the salary is the most important consideration To what extent do you agree or disagree

When it comes to picking a career, many people place the greatest emphasis on money. To some extent, I agree that income has a significant impact on people's lives;

Votes
Average: 8.9 (3 votes)
Essays by the user:

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, moreover, nonetheless, second, so, still, thus, well, while, for example, for instance, i suppose, in conclusion, such as, to begin with, what is more

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 20.0 7.30460921844 274% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 55.0 24.0651302605 229% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2734.0 1615.20841683 169% => OK
No of words: 531.0 315.596192385 168% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14877589454 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.80035803286 4.20363070211 114% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92290974756 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 310.0 176.041082164 176% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583804143126 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 848.7 506.74238477 167% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 16.0721442886 168% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.1077021181 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.259259259 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6666666667 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.14814814815 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 8.67935871743 196% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0872056910289 0.244688304435 36% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0219102661278 0.084324248473 26% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0318202799505 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0666430830401 0.151304729494 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0378415909284 0.056905535591 66% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.22 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 156.0 78.4519038076 199% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, moreover, nonetheless, second, so, still, thus, well, while, for example, for instance, i suppose, in conclusion, such as, to begin with, what is more

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 20.0 7.30460921844 274% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 55.0 24.0651302605 229% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2734.0 1615.20841683 169% => OK
No of words: 531.0 315.596192385 168% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14877589454 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.80035803286 4.20363070211 114% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92290974756 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 310.0 176.041082164 176% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583804143126 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 848.7 506.74238477 167% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 16.0721442886 168% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.1077021181 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.259259259 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6666666667 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.14814814815 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 8.67935871743 196% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0872056910289 0.244688304435 36% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0219102661278 0.084324248473 26% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0318202799505 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0666430830401 0.151304729494 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0378415909284 0.056905535591 66% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.22 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 156.0 78.4519038076 199% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.