When designing a building, the most important factor is intended use of the building rather than its outward appearance. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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When designing a building, the most important factor is intended use of the building rather than its outward appearance. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Many people argue that architects should concentrate in the function of buildings instead of its outside form. While the building needs to serve its intended purposes, I believe that the appearance of building is also one of the key factors in design.
On the one hand, the function of the building is, of course, very important. High-rise buildings which concentrate in urban cities is the best solution to solve housing problems. In fact, a lot of people move to large cities to seek great career opportunities and as a result is the increasing of population density. Therefore, multi-story buildings are the best way to provide accommodation for urban dwellers who can able to pay for exorbitant rents in big cities. For example, in Ho Chi Minh City, there are a lot of apartment buildings are being used for renting even though they are really eyesore.
On the other hand, I believe that when architects design the building, they should also consider about its appearance. Firstly, it is a necessary factor if the owners want to attract customers in the business. It is true that the characteristic buildings can become popular places where can bring an enormous estate income because of developing tourism industry and commercial services. For instance, Bitexco building was not only the highest building but also the famous and representative structure in Ho Chi Minh City before being replaced by another building. Secondly, although the development of hideous buildings is an inevitable consequence of modernization, the historic buildings has still great meanings.
In conclusion, the function and appearance play equal role in the design of buildings. In my opinion, we should consider to balance between the outward appearance and intended use of buildings.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, really, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, of course, as a result, in my opinion, it is true, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1487.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21754385965 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94689636988 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.582456140351 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 464.4 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.8240563356 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.214285714 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3571428571 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 15.0714285714 7.06120827912 213% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200873370813 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0684076214098 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0556459719754 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125861454051 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0491643726871 0.056905535591 86% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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