Where do you prefer to go for summer holidays, to big cities or to natural places?
Traveling to places far away from hometown is one of the most events that happen specially in summer because of the wonderful weather.
some people prefer to go to big cities instead of natural places because of two reasons,, some of them like to watch antiquities which is in big cities or in suburbs of cities.
And the others who like big cities for holiday like to go shopping and buy so many clothes, handicrafts and souvenirs for themselves and their relatives so they could remember about that cities.
On the other hand there are so many people who like to go to natural places instead of big cities and they believe that being relax in holidays should be first priority which will happen in natural places.
As well natural places have better weather and bigger space that make so many hobbies which is more than big cities and that gives them peace of mind so they can work well after their holidays.
Finally with considering all the aspects, personally prefer natural places for my summer holidays because I like to be relax in my holidays and be far away from stress and in my view it will happen in natural places.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, so, well, in my view, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 952.0 1615.20841683 59% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 202.0 315.596192385 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71287128713 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.24453502025 2.80592935109 80% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 176.041082164 58% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.50495049505 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 294.3 506.74238477 58% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 20.2975951904 163% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 25.9914515862 49.4020404114 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 158.666666667 106.682146367 149% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.6666666667 20.7667163134 162% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.16666666667 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.33003278588 0.244688304435 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.169154414876 0.084324248473 201% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0616619606194 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169154414876 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0616619606194 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.6 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.44 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.63 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 78.4519038076 38% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.1190380762 150% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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