Whether or not someone achieves their aims is mostly by a question of luck. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
The idea that some people’s achievements is mostly determined by luck, remains a source of controversy.While luck has a part to play in helping people to fulfilling the aims, I would argue that hard work and determination are much more important factor contributing to one’s success.
Fortune has a small role to play in people’s obtaining goals.To begin with, children being born in the rich family might get the huge advantage as they can gain access to better educational conditions and open more opportunities in their career prospects than coming from poor background .Furthermore, an individual is born with natural talents, which may enable them to easily succeed in the future . For instance, thanks to owning the god-given talent, Mozart can compose many works at the age of five and create many masterpiece that have large influence on generation later on .
On the other hand, I firmly believe that only by being industrious and hard working, could people become successful in whatever they do. Edison, for example,one of the greatest scientists in the world, spending thousands of hours searching and experimenting before successfully bring out the lightbulb that we are using nowadays.Nick Vujicic offers an another excellent example of how disorder sufferings, which resulted in the absence of four limbs, were turned into the inspirations and determination, when he earned a bachelor degree, and then become a motivational speaker who inspire people around the world.
In brief,while luck sometimes is beneficial for people to be successful, I strongly believe that ones must be extremely conscientious and determined in order to achieve objectives in their life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, may, so, then, while, for example, for instance, in brief, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1433.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40754716981 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1547677095 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.690566037736 0.561755894193 123% => OK
syllable_count: 440.1 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 44.0 20.2975951904 217% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 124.275790974 49.4020404114 252% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 238.833333333 106.682146367 224% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 44.1666666667 20.7667163134 213% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 18.8333333333 7.06120827912 267% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0775140333941 0.244688304435 32% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0396610940184 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0390583057278 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0537773956634 0.151304729494 36% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0384914575367 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 26.1 13.0946893788 199% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 18.36 50.2224549098 37% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 21.6 11.3001002004 191% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.99 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.7 8.58950901804 125% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 29.5 9.78957915832 301% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 19.6 10.1190380762 194% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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