Which is more important when choosing a job, salary or job satisfaction?
There are various factors influencing people’s decision to choose a job. Some give priority to salary while others think that job satisfaction should be more considered . In my opinion, job satisfaction is of greater significance when embarking on a career.
To begin with, employment contentment gives workers a sense of motivation and ensures their long-term working maintainance. Obviously, people have a tendency to keep up to the job that they are interested in. Once they feel fulfilled in their work, they would find it meaningful and inspiring, thus maintain their greatest productivity. On the other hand, doing the job that is not involved in personal interests results in workers’ boredom and lack of motivation. As a results, a great deal of employees these days change their proffessions despite high salary.
Furthermore, well-paid yet unsatisfying occupation has undesirable impacts on workers’ physical and mental health. In terms of bodily fitness, remunerative jobs tend to require long working hours, which results in workers’ tiredness. For instance, entertainers, who earn a huge amount of money, are at higher risk of encountering health problems as they have to stay up late or work for long. In terms of mental life, employees suffer from serious stress as a consequence of great responsibilty required in high-waid jobs. To illustrate, doctors are not allowed to make any mistake in their job of curing patients, thus face constant anxiety.
In conclusion, wage and job satisfaction are two important factors to take into account when people persue a career. However, I personally believe that workers should put more emphasis on job happiness for a better working life.
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Suggestion: .
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Suggestion: a result; results
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, so, thus, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1444.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38805970149 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05881774519 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.660447761194 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 435.6 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 20.8767813611 49.4020404114 42% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 96.2666666667 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8666666667 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.2 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.327148721296 0.244688304435 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106968195968 0.084324248473 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103486183918 0.0667982634062 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.22609478398 0.151304729494 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.154020600259 0.056905535591 271% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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