For some people, making a lot of money is an important goal. Others think that their free time is more important than wealth. Which is more important to you? Explain, giving specific reasons for your choice.
In these modern days, it is argued that earning a massive amount of money has a tendency to be considered playing an integral role in life as opposed to have more spare time. I totally assert with this viewpoint and have a great belief that it is always the most critical goal all the time.
To start with, there is no doubt about the fact that you can do nothing without money. Admittedly, being prosperous has the ability to facilitate numerous daily problems, accelerates the advancement in your career, and also benefits our society a great deal. To be more specific, a wealthy person can make a great contribution to the country such as building critical infrastructures and attending in the protection of environment. They also exert a positive effect on all aspects of life, leading to a rise in financial growth which is one of the most contributing factors influence the country's development.
Additionally, the process of earning money has a strong impact on your social skill's improvement day by day. You have to make every endeavor to fulfill the knowledge of acquisition, subsequently, your skills can be developed bit by bit. To the best of my knowledge, money brings about happiness in life as these aforementioned reasons. However, many find it profoundly hard to be wealthy in their ongoing life. In fact, it is partially true and not as impossible as exaggerated so long as you know the right way to achieve the wealth.
To draw a conclusion, after analysing cautiously, I fully endorse all aspects of this point of views. It is clear that possessing a mixed variety of money is for your own sake. The more money you earn, the better your living standard as well as your offspring future become.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 185, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ulfill the knowledge of acquisition and, subsequently, your skills can be develop...
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Line 3, column 350, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun find seems to be countable; consider using: 'many finds'.
Suggestion: many finds
... these aforementioned reasons. However, many find it profoundly hard to be wealthy in the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, well, in fact, no doubt, such as, you know, as well as, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1427.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82094594595 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85128530409 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597972972973 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 451.8 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.3705420159 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.928571429 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1428571429 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.92857142857 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170669459733 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.054990033876 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0406255604309 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10239125507 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0295817515596 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.