While many people go to university for academic study, more people should be encouraged to do vocational training because there is a lack of qualified workers such as electricians and plumbers. Agree or disagree
In today’s society, there is a debate about whether people should pursue job-related training or further academic education to strengthen the workforce. Although vocational training is necessary, I believe that pursuing further academic education is a better option.
On one hand, vocational training can fill in the missing spots of blue-collar workers and create a more accessible career path for those who are not suited for academic study. This is particularly important as many developed countries face a persistent problem of a lack of manual labor force. However, on the other hand, I believe that better academic study is crucial as many well-respected jobs such as doctors, engineers, and teachers require a certain certification or diploma.
Furthermore, due to the increasing use of technology, traditional jobs are being replaced by robots and smart artificial intelligence, which makes vocational training less important. Encouraging students to apply to universities can help meet the growing demands for such jobs and equip them with the necessary skills for the future.
In conclusion, while vocational training is a good way to address the current economic struggles, the benefits of pursuing further academic education still outweigh those of vocational programs. Therefore, individuals should consider pursuing academic study to enhance their chances of securing a well-respected job and future career success.
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- While many people go to university for academic study more people should be encouraged to do vocational training because there is a lack of qualified workers such as electricians and plumbers Agree or disagree 56
- While many people go to university for academic study more people should be encouraged to do vocational training because there is a lack of qualified workers such as electricians and plumbers Agree or disagree 56
- While many people go to university for academic study more people should be encouraged to do vocational training because there is a lack of qualified workers such as electricians and plumbers Agree or disagree 56
- While many people go to university for academic study more people should be encouraged to do vocational training because there is a lack of qualified workers such as electricians and plumbers Agree or disagree 73
- While many people go to university for academic study more people should be encouraged to do vocational training because there is a lack of qualified workers such as electricians and plumbers Agree or disagree 56
Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, so, still, then, therefore, well, while, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 41.998997996 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1221.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 214.0 315.596192385 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.70560747664 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82475343497 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09563480456 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.630841121495 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 384.3 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.823961607 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 135.666666667 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7777777778 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.0 7.06120827912 170% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.284640194792 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103915177816 0.084324248473 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0314183733857 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153122313704 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0217940686547 0.056905535591 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 13.0946893788 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.21 50.2224549098 62% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.13 12.4159519038 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.09 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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