Whether the rising temperature on Earth or deforestation is the most destructive environmental concern has been a hotly debated topic that often divides opinions. This essay will further discuss both facets with appropriate examples then draw a logical conclusion.
Climate change is the precursor to many problems, both to humans and the ecological systems. This can be observed especially in low- lying areas with escalating sea level rise, mainly caused by the great ice meltdown. Supposing million acres of land are vanishing as a result, thousands of refugees from those areas will move to the other cities, therefore causing overpopulation and mass unemployment. It is predicted that soon, the population in big cities will reach abnormally high densities, approximately 20 million inhabitants per square kilometer on average, due to swarms of people coming from coastal regions.
People who favor deforestation in this matter often point out that the loss of forests ruins our lives. Providing some parts of the lively Amazon rainforests had not been cut down for woods, indigenous inhabitants would have a reliable source of food and shelters now (an array of edible flora and fauna as well as timbers, gravels for building huts). The loss of another ecosystem service there, which was disease regulation, was devastating. Mosquitoes carrying pathogens flourished and resulted in mass mosquito- borne illnesses like Zika as their predators- birds, were almost killed when their homes were destroyed.
To conclude, disforestation and global heating are equal in terms of their disastrous consequences, mainly to human beings. Therefore, similar resources should be invested to ameliorate both of them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, then, therefore, well, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1453.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.5247148289 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93506076202 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.737642585551 0.561755894193 131% => OK
syllable_count: 447.3 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.3370487004 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.083333333 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9166666667 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.16666666667 7.06120827912 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.117931196249 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0378526772029 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0238034526534 0.0667982634062 36% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0653321358011 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0175204736574 0.056905535591 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.74 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.38 8.58950901804 121% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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