A segment of society opines that it is possible to alleviate environmental problems caused by human beings while others believe that we have run out of time. This essay will further discuss both facts with appropriate examples then draw a logical conclusion.
Wiped out flora and fauna in many parts of the world cannot be revitalized because of radiation and chemical waste. It was estimated that the current extinction rate is a thousand time higher than the natural rate, due to deforestation and other human activities Perhaps, spreading radioactive materials that made trees unable to regrow in the nuclear catastrophe in Chernobyl, Ukraine, is a prominent example. Similarly, toxic waste dumped into To Lich river in Vietnam by cement manufacturers has cleared almost every creature living underwater, except for bacteria and other microorganisms. Despite the ceaseless efforts made by the environmentally conscious authorities and environmentalists to pick up flowing litters and get rid of impurities using chlorine, it is still impossible for fish to repopulate because all the aquatic plants- their shelters, have vanished.
Some of the man-made consequences to the natural habitat, on the other hand, could be ameliorated. Habitat fragmentation can be solved by demolishing some inessential facilities such as small houses, roads and other factors contributing to this concern. For a lynx protection scheme in Europe, by 2010, all the farms located in this endangered animal’s territory had been demolished, allowing them to thrive without worrying about farmers. Besides, some other concerns like deforestation or greenhouse gases can be tackled by planting more trees or sequestering Co2. They demonstrated, I believe, that the destroyed habitats can possibly be brought back to their original states.
To conclude, despite the fact that some animals and plants cannot be recovered, we should not be pessimistic about mitigating what we have done to our Earth. Therefore, we should continue our preservation plans and save our mother nature.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: Some
...ants- their shelters, have vanished. Some of the man-made consequences to the natural ha...
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Line 5, column 626, Rule ID: MAY_COULD_POSSIBLY[1]
Message: Use simply 'can'.
Suggestion: can
... I believe, that the destroyed habitats can possibly be brought back to their original state...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, similarly, so, still, then, therefore, while, except for, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1752.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.54430379747 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10420294913 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.683544303797 0.561755894193 122% => OK
syllable_count: 551.7 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.6069662368 49.4020404114 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.769230769 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3076923077 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.53846153846 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178636687119 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0598603392979 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0359744529218 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0980809498983 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0351422621896 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.15 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.57 8.58950901804 123% => OK
difficult_words: 115.0 78.4519038076 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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