Why nowadays children spend majority of time on the TV, rather than active activities. What are the reasons behind this ? What are the solution to overcome it?
It is fact that nowadays, children spend their majority of time on watching television than ever before, rather than on any active activities. Therefore, in this essay I will discuss the reasons behind this situation, also discuss some primitives, which could be helpful to overcome it.
There are several reasons behind, why millennium day's kids like to spend their majority of time on television. To begin with, nowadays, the majority of children live in the nuclear families. By this I mean, both the parents are go out for work, and left their children at home with television, also they face difficulties in finding time for the children than ever before. According to research, in India more than half of the parents could not find time for their children. Therefore, there is a no one, who encourage the children to involve in the creative activities. Secondly, lucrative TV programs of today. There are a number of channels, who make TV programs, especially to attract the children to increase their TRP ratings, as a result, kids found those TV programs are more entertaining than other activities.
The solutions are not simple. First, the regime can play an essential role. The law enforcement agencies should make fixed working hour or restrict it, as a result parent could find time for their kids, and encourage them to take part in creative things. Second, school premises create influence on the student to involve in active activities. By this I mean, educational organization organize competitions, such as west of the best.
In conclusion, I reiterate that the nuclear family structure and lucrative programs are the main cause behind why child spend the majority of time on TV, however some step could be taken to tackle it, as fixed working hours and organize competitions in the educational institute
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 229, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'gone'.
Suggestion: gone
...s. By this I mean, both the parents are go out for work, and left their children a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, i mean, in conclusion, such as, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1531.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08637873754 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74579039762 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.548172757475 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 479.7 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.0077436535 49.4020404114 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.066666667 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0666666667 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.8 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.315617986088 0.244688304435 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0979994285313 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0736925741198 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18745281063 0.151304729494 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0888032928781 0.056905535591 156% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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