Wild animals have no place in the 21st century and the protection is a waste of resources. to what extent do you agree or disagree.
some people believe that it is waste of time and resources to spend on wild animals because we human have no need of them. I opine that we have no right to decide about wildlife and I will give my opinion in the following paragraphs.
out of all arguments in strongest one to prove my view is that we do not have a right to decide about an extinction of any wild animals. They are also living creatures and they also have right to live with freedom. For instance, people put wild animals in cages of scenturies.
The other reason to prove my point is people think that wild animals should not be given any protection as it is a waste of resources. however, it should do our best try to give protection and let them live with freedom, In addition we should avoid deforestation and the preservation rainforest is also crucial for good climate condition and for better oxygen level we can get from it.
on the other hand, some people claim that it is mandatory to keep some wild animal stay away from people and should not be given production, As it could be harmful for people to live on place which is surrounded by that animals.
to recapitulate, I retrieve my views that despite we do not need wild animals in the future, we have no right to decide about extinction and we should do whatever we can to protect them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, for instance, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1093.0 1615.20841683 68% => OK
No of words: 244.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.47950819672 5.12529762239 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95227774224 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47740054033 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 176.041082164 67% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.483606557377 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 351.0 506.74238477 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.9571798706 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.444444444 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.1111111111 20.7667163134 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.44444444444 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212794016879 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104886676083 0.084324248473 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0569382199711 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130773424257 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0383133526727 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.99 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.0 12.4159519038 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.43 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 78.4519038076 48% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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