Wild animals have no use in the 21st century and trying to preserve animals now is just a waste of money.
Wild animals regardless of which century we live in, play an integral role in maintaining the natural echo-system. It is not up to us humans to decide when they can be of use or whether they have to use at all.
As we know many wild creatures are undergoing extinction due to excessive poaching or hunting. These poaches are ruthless and will kill for money. They will continue to supply for the right price as long as there is the demand. I have personally seen many advertisements depicting stories of how these animals are killed for their body parts. It is big business in countries like China where there is a high demand for these animals parts. The parts are processed and used an medicinal products in the myth that they will increase their libido or keep them forever young and strong! When the buying stops the killing too. Therefore we must do our part in protecting these wild animals so that they can live in their natural habitat without human interference.
Furthermore, we must invest on protecting the wild animals in their natural habitat to prevent unnecessary dangers to humans. Imagine an echo-system where there are no deer as a result of hunting. Lions and Tigers prey on deer to feed their pack. Lions of Tigers who feed on them will venture into human inhabited land in order to feed. Unlike humans they have to justification but raw animal instincts. The more we humans destroy their natural habitat, the more we put ourselves in danger as they will come into our land destroying crops, farms and livestock.
Therefore, in my opinion, if we do not take action now, our future generations may not witness these animals in the wild. Preservation is better than their extinction.
- Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world. Do you think this is a positive or negative development? 84
- Today, the quality of life in large cities is decreasing. Discuss the causes and solutions. 81
- Age discrimination occurs when a decision is made on the basis of a person’s age. In the workplace, these are most often decisions about being employed in the first place, winning promotions or being unfairly dismissed. Should discrimination against old 67
- Whether or not someone achieve their aims is mostly a question of luck. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 61
- Some people think placing advertisements in schools is a great resource for public schools that need additional funding, but others think it exploits children by treating them as a captive audience for corporate sponsors.Choose which position you most ag 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 474, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...parts. The parts are processed and used an medicinal products in the myth that the...
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Line 3, column 487, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'product'?
Suggestion: product
...rts are processed and used an medicinal products in the myth that they will increase the...
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Line 3, column 584, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... or keep them forever young and strong! When the buying stops the killing too. There...
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Line 3, column 623, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
... When the buying stops the killing too. Therefore we must do our part in protecting these...
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'furthermore', 'if', 'may', 'so', 'therefore', 'as a result', 'in my opinion']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.218068535826 0.247107183377 88% => OK
Verbs: 0.155763239875 0.155533422707 100% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0872274143302 0.0946595960268 92% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0467289719626 0.0501214627716 93% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0996884735202 0.0437548338989 228% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.121495327103 0.122226691241 99% => OK
Participles: 0.0311526479751 0.0403226058552 77% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.59709198502 2.80594681477 93% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0311526479751 0.0326793684256 95% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0716510903427 0.0861772015684 83% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0311526479751 0.021408717616 146% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0218068535826 0.011925033212 183% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1708.0 1933.35771543 88% => OK
No of words: 296.0 316.048096192 94% => OK
Chars per words: 5.77027027027 6.12580529183 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20517956788 99% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.310810810811 0.374742101984 83% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.233108108108 0.28420135186 82% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.138513513514 0.203846283523 68% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.101351351351 0.137316102897 74% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59709198502 2.80594681477 93% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.037074148 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567567567568 0.56093040696 101% => OK
Word variations: 59.9690633419 60.7387585426 99% => OK
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0891783567 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.4444444444 20.7743622355 79% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.5434062243 49.517814964 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.8888888889 127.492653851 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4444444444 20.7743622355 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.444444444444 0.814263465372 55% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 3.99599198397 100% => OK
Readability: 39.7552552553 49.1944974215 81% => OK
Elegance: 1.22680412371 1.69124875643 73% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.349319814961 0.332605444948 105% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.102808838261 0.102741220458 100% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.111591269996 0.0668466124924 167% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.438216509346 0.534860350844 82% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.147029095296 0.148594505496 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113661059165 0.134430193775 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0531068654252 0.0742795772207 71% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.240074235625 0.324371583561 74% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.078869212845 0.0638462369009 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.236752425922 0.228012699653 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0502441106156 0.058150111329 86% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.68436873747 58% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.41683366733 176% => OK
Positive topic words: 4.0 5.90881763527 68% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.5751503006 116% => OK
Neutral topic words: 5.0 1.9629258517 255% => OK
Total topic words: 12.0 10.4468937876 115% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.