Without capital punishment (the death penalty) our lives are less secure and crimes of violence increase. Capital punishment in essential to control violence in society.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Some people claim that it is important for society to have capital punishment because it could raise secures and crimes of violence decrease. This essay do disagree with this statement and would discuss two reasons why the death penalty should not be encouraged.
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First of all, the death penalty which is violence action to a human being. Those who broken the law especially killing people need to experience capital punishment. Although he/she deserves to die, capital punishment could not represent justice and decrease the crimes of violence. Because those who died could not help the victim. Using death penalty unables people to learn from the mistakes. If those who agree that capital punishment avoid from crimes of violence, only proved that those who keep away from violence is afraid of death.
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Secondly, many counties already banned the capital punishment due to human rights violation. Because to control violence is not to implement the death penalty. As we know death penalty is set up by those who are violent killing someone disagree with him. Therefore, in the lawful society should be send them to prison instead of killing them. Sending lawbreaker to prison allows them to be educated. Actually, education is better than punishment. To decrease crimes of violence educate the public and the lawbreaker which is the most effective way.
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To sum up, capital punishment is not essential to control violence due to itself violating human right and its effect. I do think that control violence is really important but the most important thing is to find the right method.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...nishment due to human rights violation. Because to control violence is not to implement...
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Message: Did you mean 'sent'?
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, if, really, second, secondly, so, therefore, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 8.3376753507 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1339.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50142147563 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.538461538462 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 408.6 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.5198015766 49.4020404114 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 78.7647058824 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2941176471 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.29411764706 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 16.0 3.9879759519 401% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.34914970197 0.244688304435 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104167663822 0.084324248473 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0735902530114 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.223755150516 0.151304729494 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0435876518624 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.0 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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