Women and men are commonly seen as having different strengths and weaknesses. Is it right to exclude males and females from certain professions because of their gender?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
There has much discussion revolving around this issue that strengths and weaknesses differences have been seen between males and females from certain professions due to their gender. Although the proportion of people assume it would not be far-fetched to hold the view that there are not far more differences between men and women, in my opinion, there is absolutely a myriad of differences between them.
The most rational justification is that many opportunities are obliterated by physical abilities for females. A good illustration of this is women who work in vehicle engineering. Thus, they could not pick up the heavy objects because they may have not enough power.
A more compelling reason that could be thought of by a figure of people is: a woman could not be a good leader due to their strong emotion that impacts on their decisions. Simply put, the more women are emotional, the more their decisions possess a very serious threat in or society and life.
The further reason is: some people who live in third world countries call into question that by the religious or traditional idea, their concept is that women could not be president or leader owing to their history that is: all of the leaders have been a man since the prehistoric period so women may indeed do not overcome to this kind of behaviors.
Crystal clear is the problem of gender in our society. However, in no way do I think that we can not tackle the role of gender in certain professions, so I absolutely agree that gender excludes equal strengths and weaknesses between males and females.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 225, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
... leader owing to their history that is: all of the leaders have been a man since the prehi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, so, third, thus, i think, kind of, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1309.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86617100372 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69388252932 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.561338289963 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 405.9 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 84.1068368208 49.4020404114 170% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.9 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.9 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.6 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235463292907 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0846256141329 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0850015004384 0.0667982634062 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116620224907 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0684339919923 0.056905535591 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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