The working week should be shorter, and workers should have a longer weekend.
Do you agree or disagree?
The time that workers spend working should be reduced and there should be more time on the weekend for workers to relax. In this essay, I will evaluate the rationales leading to my partial agreement with this way.
On the one hand, there are some reasons why working time cannot decrease, and the resting time cannot be pulled longer. In this day and age, several products have been created with lower quality when selling to customers, and the income of workers who have a long weekend is lower, which influences some parts of the finances of a country. The major relative to health would be affected seriously by the time spent resting too much because patients cannot save themselves or treat themselves. As a result, fostering laziness and over-reliance on robots, while the hard work of workers, and having a long rest can make some operations need controllers working full-time become delayed.
On the other hand, having a long-term resting day can bring some benefits for workers. Mental health and physical health would be advanced with nice relaxation. There can be improving efficiency at work, which produces a large amount of quality goods, or creating better services for consumers, bringing high value for government and employers. Thus, raising relaxation time, and reducing work time is a good idea for workers who have been spending the whole time on their job.
In conclusion, rise weekends are longer than working time, and spending short items for working. In my view, both fields have their benefits, and I partially agree because resting too much can lead to some consequences relative to income, health, and personality while taking a rest is a good thing for workers who are hard working.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, thus, while, in conclusion, as a result, in my view, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1432.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00699300699 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51142433459 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.562937062937 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 435.6 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 8.0 0.809619238477 988% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.9478905571 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.333333333 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8333333333 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.16666666667 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223530920355 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0894618379592 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0890825358371 0.0667982634062 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157699839093 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0640406834391 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.